martes, 19 de diciembre de 2017

WRITERS CORNER

These are some of the best writing papers in 1 and 2-ESO.Wth simple guidelines, you can do a really godd job like these. Take a look and leave your comments.
By Laura Duque 2ºB
By Carlos Jimena, 1ºE

20 comentarios:

  1. Hi! everyone this is Javier Saavedra from 1ºE this writingtask is interesting because is good to learn write a good writingtask

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  2. Hello my name is Laura from 2°B. I think about this writing that very good and rangé. Bye!!!

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  3. Hello my name is Mohsin from 1°E.
    This writing task of my classmate is very good.It doesn't have any mistake.It have a perfect composition.I really like it

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  4. hello, my name is ivan cabrera and I am from 1 that e, this wording I like because it has vocabulary and also paragraphs, an example to follow, xaoo

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  5. hi! this is Alba Bañez Corento from 1ºE
    I find it very good writing, very good presentation and with very few failures. I loved it!!

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  6. Hello! This is Javier Delgado from 1ºE.
    In my opinion it is a very good composition, because there aren´t a lot of mistakes and you can know his profile very easy. Despite it is a good writing task I don´t understand what means the last paragraph where he write about watch his cousin plays...
    Bye.

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  7. Hi, I'm Adrián Báñez from 1 ° E.
    This is my first comment.

    This writing task is fantastic and very complete.
    I like your work, because it is very long, fun(not is boring), and ideal..
    Is amazing!

    Thanks Carlos, for presenting your work!

    Goodbye!

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  8. Hello mi mame is Álvaro Escamilla from 1°E and this is a good text I like It a lot.Is a perfect text.I like The life for Carlos.Bye.

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  9. hello! This is Lucia Vazquez from 1ºE.
    I think this isa great composition with a good presentation, and a good letter. there aren´t a lot of mistakes.
    Congratulations Carlos for your job.
    Good bye.

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  10. Hello¡ This is Carlos Carrion from 1ºE.
    it is good writing because its organized and is good vocabulary

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  11. Hello my name is Marta Delgado and I am of 1E and this is my comment of this composition: this very well cast to have made a child of the first of that, has enough vocabulary, divides well paragraphs and has very good presentation I like very much.
    See you tomorrow. Good bye

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  12. Hello my name is Elena de 1E and I think that Carlos has done a good job because I give my congratulations for your work goodbye.

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  13. Hi, I'm Juan Francisco from 2nd of ESO B. These writings are very good and they are great for people from the first and second of ESO congratulations.

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  14. Hello, my name is Rocio from 2°ESO B I think that my friend Laura was explain very good her writingtask.

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  15. Hello, this is Badr from 1. E this writing is very good can help you very much. I like this job, thank you.

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  16. Hello my name is Lucía Sánchez, i'm from 2° B . I think the writing of my friend Laura Duque is fantastic, bye, kisses !

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  17. Hello my name is Lucía Sánchez, i'm from 2° B . I think the writing of my friend Laura Duque is fantastic, bye, kisses !

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  18. THIS DESCRIPTION IS VERY GOOD, I LIKE A LOT. ALBA BAÑEZ CORENTO 1ºE.

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  19. Hello my name is Candela Romero fron 2°B i think about this writing that very interesting and good.

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  20. Hello my name is Candela Romero fron 2°B i think about this writing that very interesting and good.

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